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Commission: Flame Prince

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Lol im making my lineart with smaller lines and yeah ok

what is fire how do i fire omg OTL
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I think this is really great. Your lineart is looking awesome and the coloring job is very good. I actually think the fire is awesome, because it makes it look more mystical than just normal fire. The shading is great, but the one thing that could probably use some work is the placement of the left elbow-- it just looks a bit odd. You could probably just fix this by simply adjusting some of the muscles in the left arm. But the rest of the drawing is GREAT and the improvement you've recently made really shows! ... Plus I think he's sexy ^_^ *APPLAUSE*